"An Unforgettable Journey" - A poem by Rain | |
This'll be one of many poems I have written, though the first one I'll post, considering it's my most recent poem. Opinions, suggestions, any sort of feedback at all? Feel free to express them freely.
An Unforgettable Journey
Blinding gold light glows through the trees.
Running into a breath-taking dream,
we glide on our feet, the air blowing through our ears,
the autumn leaves cracking below our feet.
We fly through the golden colored forest
the perfect autumn breeze lifting spirits as it circles us,
the light burning our eyes…
Each step we take, closer to heaven.
The forest then comes to an end,
the flowing creek we now see calls out our name.
We dance thoughtlessly on the cool water,
the autumn breeze following our every step,
we jump onto loose leaves in the trees above us,
they take us up into mid flight, and down back again into the water.
Laying ourselves down, we stare at the crystal blue sky…
Its elegance radiates our mind…
The snow-white clouds perfect without a single sin.
The water below us suddenly grows larger,
it’s loud rush roars throughout our ears.
The river races us to a waterfall like none other,
It’s color’s fading together like the rainbow touching the clouds above us.
We then prepare ourselves for the peaceful fall
we drop down, our hair blowing behind us,
Gently touching the water, as it flows down our necks.
We land with a dunk of tasteful water,
As it fills our mouths with a luscious flavor,
Our skin glows magnificently as we sink lower,
Our feelings unrecognizable,
Our thoughts indescribable,
Our eyes glow with pure perfection.
We then fall slowly to the bottom of the lake
the water carrying us safely…
Fish of colors unable to describe swim all around us.
We can no longer hear nor feel a soul.
The water effortlessly floats us to the top,
we gaze in awe at the flowing, rainbow colored waterfall above us.
We lift ourselves into the air and glide to the sun,
we splash ourselves through it…the heat warming our spirit.
We then lay ourselves onto the clouds,
As God hovers over us, giving us the feeling of safety.
We then drift into an endless slumber,
the sunlight glowing on the mountains below us.
And slowly, we awake to reality.
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