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Old 01-09-2002, 04:38 PM
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Sparrow

A shard of splintered glass still pricks my foot
since I passed underneath the window burst
by sparrow flight, as if the building put
itself into her path and wasn't first
on this old street--predates by eighty springs
my birth, her egg. But in her jealousy
of robins' breasts, of cardinal-bright wings,
she'd slit her throat on kitchen glaziery
and dyed down red. The tendrils of her blood
that traced the scratches in my iron sink
remain, despite my bleach, despite the flood
of soap and scrub. I've seen a sparrow shrink
from feathered warm to nonsense lines of brown,
and feel the glass in me that brought her down.
 
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Old 01-09-2002, 05:18 PM
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Sad. Good, but sad.
 
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Old 01-09-2002, 05:27 PM
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Beautiful.
Memories are exactly like this; they can throb, itch or tickle.
I guess that’s the throbbing one…
 
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Old 01-09-2002, 10:33 PM
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For lack of any truly eloquent words.

Wow. Beautiful. Truly.

Shannon ...
 
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Old 01-12-2002, 01:07 AM
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Thank you, Kurt, Shannon, and... er... boob.

It's nice to hear when something works.

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