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Old 06-09-2001, 12:41 PM
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I currently have an article (in draft form) about a product called FlexAll QuikGel. It's part of a write-off I'm participating in. Anyway, here are the topics I have included so far: What it is, How to use it, When to use it, and Competitors.

Can anyone think of any other information about the product that would be useful to a consumer? I hate posting articles just to have people tell me I was missing something that they felt like they needed to know, and then having to edit the article. Thanks
 
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Old 06-09-2001, 03:15 PM
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You've definitely got the basics there. One thing I, as a reader, would want to see in a review like this (or ANY review, for that matter) is your personal experience with the product. What kind of relief from aches and pains did it give to you personally? Tell a story from your own experiences.

 
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I talk about my personal experiences in all of the categories, it's hard not to, since I am biased from my own experiences with the product. Thanks for the tip.
 
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Pearman, don't forget what is in it and what its claims are.
 
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I'm really behind here, but you might want to include how it feels and smells. Whenever I'm reading about gels and creme pain relievers, I always think of the Vicks VapoRub that my mom always smeared on us when we were kids.

I can almost smell it now!
 
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