My story, your opinions...

Greenify13 · #1 12-26-2005, 11:06 AM

There in the shadows.doc

Please read and tell me what your thoughts are;
I would greatly appreciate it!!!
Christine

**lynnzop**[$] · #2 12-26-2005, 11:28 AM

Grr. I can't read beyond the first page because I have to do some admin work on my new pc and I don't want to do it right now.

But what I did read looks VERY descriptive...you have a great grasp on coloring a picture for your reader. More later.

Greenify13 · #3 12-26-2005, 11:29 AM

Thank you, I appreciate it

Greenify13 · #4 12-27-2005, 01:58 AM

it is rather long, so I really understand noone having the time to read it and such....
But if you happen to find the time (would be great), and you want to read it (you dont have to), it is there,
and if you want you can tell me your thoughts/epinions on it.( once again your choice)
However I would (and already do) greatly appreciate any efforts put to reading it, even if never finishing.
A pre-thank you, ( i might not be around for a day or two)
Christine

Greenify13 · #5 12-28-2005, 08:53 AM

I was wondering if anyone else had any fo their own writings that they want read? I sure am bored enough to finish them!

Christine

**amykhar** · #6 12-28-2005, 09:15 AM

Christine, many of us have stuff over at Epinions. It's not all product reviews either. There are essays and short works of fiction.

Amy

Greenify13 · #7 12-28-2005, 09:43 AM

Thank you Amy, I dont think i had ever been in there. And I thank you for sending me in the right direction.

Christine

**Prepoia**[$] · #8 12-28-2005, 09:45 AM

http://www.epinions.com/member/show_~writerscorner

Greenify13 · #9 12-28-2005, 01:23 PM

im sorry but im confused, maybe im looking in the wrong place. but i was on epinions... and all i could find was the ability for me to write reviews and comments on other things. Which is cool, but i just want comments on something i have written at this moment.

**amykhar** · #10 12-28-2005, 02:08 PM

I suggested Epinions because in post #5 you said you were bored and wanted to read other members' writing

Amy

Greenify13 · #11 12-28-2005, 02:27 PM

Thanks Amy!! Truly helps, i just get lost in there. I can easily tell that people have articles on it. I just can not figure out for the life of me how to do so myself!
Christine

**hadassahchana**[$] · #12 12-28-2005, 10:08 PM

Sandy posted the link to Writer's Corner, a grea place for you to post things you want others to comment on.

Cindy

Greenify13 · #13 12-29-2005, 03:38 PM

Thank you all, for trying to assist me in my path.
But I think I have given up my quest. I do appreciate all offers
and suggestions, though.

Christine

**Prepoia**[$] · #14 12-29-2005, 05:10 PM

Why in the world would you give up your quest? Most of what I've learned worthwhile was learned as I traveled along my path. Giving up is never a good option.