I am here to learn something from all you vetran writers. I am currently undergoing a project to write a continous fictious story line on epinions that will hopefully add product knowledge and create a fun little plot to follow along the way. From my first few in the series I had lot's of helpful feedback from those who read them and the common theme is that I need more information regarding the product. This is why humbly ask any one on the epinionsaddict's form for some feedback to make a project like this possible.
Also if anyone already has links to any epinions that are a fictious story lines in nature I would love to see them. Send em to me regardless of the rating (afterall for those that didn't quite cut it are a great learning experience to see what not to do).
If you're looking for a model for what you intend, you might want to look at MrsNormanMaine's reviews.
The first two paragraphs of her always stellar reviews deal with the fictional life of Mr. and Mrs. Norman Maine, a thinly-disguised showbiz couple. Read sequentially, they offer a coherent story-line. Always, though, there is a logical segue into a movie or product review.
It's not Epinions bait, but Infoworld has a very gripping story line with one of their commentators.
Robert Cringley, Notes from the Field
The articles are written a little like a hard-boiled gum shoe thriller, and include some tawdry tidbits from his personal life. Who knows whether it is biography or fiction, as long as it entertains.
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